What is your oppinion on this poem?

I wrote this for a guy that means the world to me and I want him to understand that I cant live without him.. What do you think about it though? :)

Answer #1

lol

Answer #2

You have to show us the poem in order to get opinions…

Answer #3

Lmao!! Im sorry you guys.. I forgot to paste It… Lol Ill redue it.. Sorry lol

Answer #4

lol your missing 1 thing… the poem

Answer #5

Its a little short…

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