What do you think of my improved poem?

I want to leave a poem for people to , tell me what they think

I had to right it for English class, I enjoy writing it now lol. This is deep, something you want to keep, you would even go ...

A Love Poem Love is an entity Which very few have seen Most do not even know What love means Love is when he Shows you how ...

I hope that one day you will see it my way. Till that day, you see it the unclear way For love is hard to give without taking...

I mean both were written by Edgar Allan Poe, but i wonder if he means about the same girl or not or its just a coincidence. W...

'when I am in his arms im in heaven When I lean into his kiss nothing else matters When I look into his eyes every thing is p...

I loved her I cared for her she was my true love she was everything to me evedentaly I was nothing to her she used me a...

I made up a poem, tell me what you think: Willow tree, willow tree why are you so sad? She is no longer sitting on your bran...

Before I put the poem down I would like to say. It not weird for a boy to make a poem ( I think :d). And this is the first on...

I promised I would always love you , you promised you would always love me I promised I would never let go , you promised you...