what do you people think of this poem???

actually I made it for my boyfriend I love him 2 death please tell me what do you think about it?? honestly :D:D

                                   flying love          
                                   ```

on the wings of an eagle my love 4 you flies soaring higher and higher and touching the skies I reached up abouve and pulled a star from the sky to place it within your precious eyes

to dwell there 4 ever as my love for u on the wings of our love enduring and true there are so many things my heart want’s 2 say I love you my sweet heart and there is no other way

the moment I opened my heart and let you in I saw the gr8 love starting 2 begin so I opened my eyes 2 see you I hope and pray that your feelings are true

I think finaly I found an angle that walks on the ground I could search my hole life through and never ever find onother u

your special and I wanted you 2 know that I truely completly love you so

that's it what do you think???
Answer #1

THAT’S AWESOME! I love writing and reading other peoples writings, this is a great self expression of your love for another person…keep it up!

Answer #2

omg I love it!!! its beautiful and its catchy <333 omg its sooo good :) your a great writer girl!!! :D

Answer #3

yeah this is wonderful! I like it really a lot! :)

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