A poem I wrote. Check it out.

FACING MATTERS.

I cant abide this anymore I have the ability to stop but I can’t confused and baffled by the drama mushed up in my face Always so soft and so kind, Should I rigor them, or let it get through my day? Let the hardness run through my mind should I deprive from chaos or find my way through solutions. I shouldn’t have to look for a way to hide or a way to coax all of them. So I face matters Daze& Daydreaming help me get through.

A poem I wrote when I was in sixth grade. What do you think?

Answer #1

its ok like if you twiked it it would be better.

Answer #2

its gd gd ;)

Answer #3

Ahh, It’s ok!

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