The darkest day (the fool)

The darkest day begins today No more laughter, it all flew away On the wind that came to play

My hands broken, my feet cold I feel oh so very old

Missing your smile Wishing to die All I can do now is lay down and cry

Where have you gone, oh goddess of peace Are trying to make my life cease? Is it your wish for me to end? Did I not please you with all the love I send

Did your heart not thaw with the words of my soul Or was it broken, so long ago I will wait here in darkness for you to return And if not, I promise I will surely burn

So come quickly back to me Oh what magnificent beauty you are to see

~loneliness is immortal, foolishness can die, but waiting for your loved one is a thorn in each eye~

Answer #1

OMGGG did you made that poem up yourself??? If so, holy cow that was good.

Damn that poem would be awesome on Facebook ‘ I love my boyfriend’ fan page. :) …hint, hint, wink, wink…this Aussie missy wants to borrow it.

Answer #2

Completely heart-wrenching…fabulous work, Kal.

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