by day, by night

hey everyone read my poem im just making it up on the spot.

     by day the sun shines.
     by night the moon lightens.

each day you take another way. each day you always find a way. each night you have a little fright. each night it must be alright.

I know its a little short.but what do you think?

Answer #1

I love it

Answer #2

I IKE IT YOU WRITE GOOD POETRY

Answer #3

iitsz a good poem, ii liike iit

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