poems and does this sound good?

ok I’m 13 and I write poems all the time. I am so depressed though because my parents split up and then they always fight on the phone. heres on of them tell me what you think.

I’m just a girl that is totoally confussed. my eyes are sad even though I’m not blue. I look around and try to think why I am looking so bleak. then I turn around to see that you have come to follow me. the tears well up in my uneven eyes and then I stare at you and begin to cry. you just stand there and shadow me, when I look up your laughing at me. I ask you why you would laugh at me and then I find this heart breaking. I feel so shattered and then I see, you rfriends have come to see whats wrong and then they laugh when I tell them to move along. I look for you and your there for me and then I hoping half-heartedly that you will come back one day and take this chance and give love for me. I find you there once again cradleing me. you pull my face up to yours and then you say that I’m all yours. you lean down and then kiss me. my heart fliters aimlessly, you look down and then you see you do it again and I’m good in. I feel the tears run down my face for that love that we share will never break. that day that you and I kiss is so wonderufl I’ll never forget.

what do you think. be honest. I know it may be depressing but just try to remeber that I write about depressing stuff. sorry. just tell me what you think PLEASE.