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gold is valuable, in addition maluable, silver is powerful, it can hold down demens and the supernatural , as a werewolf , im subdued by it, I can tell though , your infected without being bit, it takes one touch to show, what I already know, your my souls desire, my internal desire, all in all , you are my silver

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You need to work on the technical bits like spelling (did you mean to write ‘demons?) capital letters, full stops, and the layout in general. But I will assume you are just putting it out there for people to judge the content.

I don’t hate it…I don’t dislike it…I don’t understand the combining of god amongst things like werewolves…but it’s not a BAD poem overall, it could just be better.

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