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Opinions please for these lyrics
These are some song lyrics I’ve been workin on for a rock song , I woul like some opinions please .
Sitting on my back all the time , Visiting all the towns low lifes, They owe me some money , Now my butts on the line , Somethin will be chopped off, If you dont decide to pay up, Whos with me , you with me? And how you spending your time,
Clean up with no more stuff, This time spent will be rough, Please help me , forgive me, & prison not the place for me ,
jlw82
Ya its a little cryptic , but deliberate , I was hopeing people could take there own meaning from it , but also I know what I was saying .
Sorry. I don’t get it. I like where you’re going with it, maybe try rewording it.
AWESOME!!!
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