one of my sad poems..what do you think

“Bleeding Misery”

days pass..as I melt in this closure of darkness.. a light,alas(t)..to see through me as it proves I am nothing.. but what I am I..whom survived long enough on this earth.. but who am I..to have suffered in unison to those souls perished..

words pleading..to linger out of my dried throat.. though I am speechless..for nothing can escape my voice.. my eyes weak..tired of enduring the sleepless nights.. my wrists in the killing..ready to undergo the cut of yet, another blade..

the scars..forever staining my unheard cries.. the neverending pain..haunting me throughout each and every step of life.. the curse..slowly beginning to strike again.. awaiting the worst..only to rip apart my skin..

(I used to have the horrible addiction of what is known as “self-harm”.I used to cut.and this was a poem I wrote a wile ago when I cut.

Answer #1

this is amazing! raw and emotion and I have to say, since I’m kind of a writer too, I don’t like reading much because I’m such a picky reader. But this is by far AMAZING. Always always right about what you feel because then it is better and truer and pure :)

a little poem she wrote just a few words what do you think? she asked should I cast my vote? take that chance and it was worth it poem so good I feel wordless.

Answer #2

you put a lot of emotion into this poem I can tell, buhh its really good as well you should go pro or suhmtingg hehe(:

Answer #3

That was cosmic.

Answer #4

woow! that was really nice and good.. aww! I hope you stopped it thou.. heart touching.. you rock loveskate you got talent!! :)

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