My first love poem that I wrote!!!

Okay. This was the first love poem that I wrote. I hope you like it.

When you’re with your friends, you act like I’m not around, When I call, you say that you don’t hear a sound. Apparently my love wasn’t enough To get through your armour, thick and tough. My heart began to grow a heavy shield, Uncovering secrets and my power revealed. The next time you look into my eyes, you won’t see grey, Instead you will see what you did to me on that day.

Put any comment you like.

Answer #1

if you guys want, I can make you a personal poem. just fun mail me a topic. Give me a week or so, and I will get you an amazing poem of your own! and thank you for saying that I am so good. So is my bffl, EMODANCER. Check out her poems, because she is also awesome.

Cheerful0292

Answer #2

I love it! that is really good! what inspired you to write that?? ITS AMAZING!

Answer #3

Bravo! clapping that was so good! I love it.

Answer #4

LOVING IT!!! haha your good =]

Answer #5

IT’S REALLY GOOD…I LOVE IT!!! GOOD JOB! =)!!!

Answer #6

wow thanks.

Answer #7

NICE

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