I have post 3 poet since...this is 2/3...Hope you like it...

1st- FELT LONELY IN SOUND…

Here I sit, in motion but not in soul; My quietness, it gives me a taught; Calm I felt eventhough its not; Tears of alone, tore it all.

Noises then woke me up; In my sleep of swaying path; I realize its not what it seems; I felt more inneed than it to be free.

The sound of sway and the sound me; Bound with disturbance in the story lane; I have my story, its my own; But it stop when I know, Im not alone.

2nd- I WILL SMILE

Sadness is not my beginning; Happyness is not my ending; But cry is were I started; A Smile I planned before I ended.

Knowledge is the start of pain; Which hard to get and harder to gain; But when you know, the final is pride; You will smile because, you know you survived.

Finaly, I speak in the tone of air; Where a glimpse of light shine to my prays; Hope and faith pour down to me; Where It kills the lies and makes me smile.

The 1st, I made it because my only friend/classmate @ bestfriends moved to another school…and now I am very…very lonely… The 2nd, I made because, after finished with the 1st one,

I’ve got this wonderful idea…hope you all like it…

Answer #1

I will Smile is my favorite. I love how it is pretty positive and uplifting. You’re very talented, thanks for sharing :)

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