GONE poem...I hope that you like it.

Everybody that answered to my other poem was really happy about it, so here is another one of my poems, which is called GONE. I hope that you like it.

A shining tear falls down my cheek, My friends are gone, and I am weak. I look around, and I’m all alone, I chose to call a “friend” on the phone. No one answers to hear my cries, My friends are gone, but left their lies.

A shiver of sadness runs down my spine. What did I do? Do I deserve this crime? For all these things I’ve been blamed, They’re not true, but yet I’m ashamed. I begin to wonder if I can be trusted. But I’m not sure; my heart has been busted.

Feel free to put in any comment you like.

Thanks! Cheerful0292

Answer #1

that was great and I totally understand that poem , how do you write poems that great

Answer #2

actually, trueorfalse, I wrote a book. It’s more of a fantasy, but I have people at my school reading it right now. I might write a book of poems, but I’m not exactly sure how I could get like eighty poems done quickly. I write when I am really mad or sad. It’s not that often that you see me writing happy things in my poems. I might write one, and I will fun mail it to you, but you would have to add me as a friend. I am currently writing more poems, so if you want me to send them to you, add me as a friend and fun mail me. I look forward to hearing from all of you.

Cheerful0292

Answer #3

I realy like your poem it is so true and did you really rute because it is amizing

Answer #4

I agree with ally. I loved it 2, so pretty.

Answer #5

omg so kewl you shud publish a book of poems if thats what you like doing

Answer #6

that was amazing and it was a totally true poem. I know exactly the friends that you are talking about cheney but you and I will always be here forever.

Answer #7

:D thats amazing :D

Answer #8

yes I really did write it.

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