How should the second verse go?

How does the first verse an choruys sound

Verse Sometimes * can’t see what he has he has a family who loves him he’s in a ban he plays guitar someday he’ll be the shining star I’ll never be that far

Chorus Are you a fallen angel sent own straight from heaven when I see you your still shining are you a fallwn angel because baby I’ll catch you when you fall fallen angel

How shoul the second verse go What should I put in the second verse how does it sound so far. I’m gonna give it 2 mycrush for valentines day. I wrote it can anyone help me with the second verse please.

Answer #1

Do you have a beat to it? It’s hard to go along with it without a tempo or chord progression.

Answer #2

Hey I believe you posted the same question an hour ago. Try not to post questions more then once, if someone knows the answer they will help you. Just don’t double post.

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