How should the second verse go?

It goes like this

verse 1

Sometimes * can’t see what he has he has a family who loves him he’s in a band he plays guitat someday he’ll be the shining star I’ll never be that far

chorus are you a fallen angel sent own straight from heaven when I see you your still shining are you a fallen angel because beby I’ll catch you when you fall fallen angel

How should the 2nd verse sound. What should I add does it sound goo so far

Answer #1

I dont think you should give it to your crush personally. Guys just arent really into that kinda thing

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