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Do you like my poems?

Im all alone in this dark place, I dont know where to go there is no more space, My life is torne into peices all Because of the man that will never read this… I dont know how to act or what to do… All that I know was I needed you…

No one knows what I see, No one cares that I dont know who to be, I take a look around and All I want to do is frown, My daddys gone and and I tried to move on, He was the one there for me, He was the one that tried to see, But hes gone and he hurt me, I dont want him to ever see, All of the pain he caused me…

What should I name them?

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Answer #1

shrouded??? are you a poet? because I would like advice from them…

Answer #2

I would like to fancy myself one, yes lol

Answer #3

It seems as though you do have potential, I can see it, though it lays shrouded.

Answer #4

thanks, they’re 2 different ones… but im not sure what to mane em…

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