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Ey im back and I need another title lol: cold metal against my \white wrist Maybe Even my legs let the blood flow How could I sink this low I coulnt resist the urge in the end I’ve gave in to temptation . when nothingness is all I feel it reminds me that I am real but In the end when the blood has dried all tears wiped aside The Happyness I want The Sadness I despite The hurt that I can no longer feel its gone , for now emotionless is what I am but phsicaly I can feel Cuase this blood, is showing me Im Phisicly alive And Emotionly Saddened .

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Answer #1

:) it’s good what about the name being temptation or reguvination-spelling???

Answer #2

Very good. I like it. I’m not good at making up titles, unfortunately. But it’s an awesome poem.

Answer #3

thats how I feel. I write poems too so I can express…

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