How do you like THIS poem???

this poem is well I dont know if it really is a poem but I wrote it and I kinda like it. the title is “US”

anger- one word to describe the feeling inside of me

love- one thing I’ve longed for

Will I find it? who knows. Will I want it? I dont know. But when I find it, I wont let it go because “ us “ is worth fighting for.

so what do ya think???

Answer #1

hahalamefool’s answer was pointless…no offense. dont listen to her.

I like it a lot sara! its really great! :D keep writing more! you have talent :D

Answer #2

It’s really good. You could try writing some more though.

Answer #3

I like it sara it reflects me

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