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When a hold u… hold you close… a feel so complete… a feel so whole… a never want to let you go… buh that’s now how the story goes… we’re livin in this hope.. the hope of sumfin real… sumfin true… when deep inside.. we know we cant see it through.. our love grows stronger… day by day… and thats the reason a cant delay… the break-up… day in day out… my life is hell… being with you gives me so much grief… people look at me with disgust… call me a slag… call me a slut… I try to ignore these pathetic fools… but deep down they makin me fink… dey makin me fink.. what if its true?!? what if its true?!? is this love? How can it b?!? when deep inside these feelings lurk… if love hurts… it wont work… and thats the reason a cant delay the break-up a tell myself… every night… as a cry myself to sleep 2night… 2morow I will do it… 2morrow I will end it… buh every time a see your face… a just cant picture me without your embrace… I love you 2 much 2 let you go… even if it means getin called a whor*… al never tell you why they call me so… you’ll never know your the reason they make me feel so low… your feelings are so precious to me… and a never want to see you hurt… even if you’ll never see… how hurt I really be… I dread college and cant wait to leave… as alas al be free… free from the insults… free from the pain… den a can finally start my life again.. you mean the world to me and just wish you could c… how special you make me feel.. your all I need and so much more… an if a could I would b with you forevorrr… am causing you grief with your family… don’t want to hurt.. so al hurt you no more… it’ll soon b ova… but al love you forevorr… I love you babe…

Answer #1

yea that was really good! keep writing

<3alex

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