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Ok, this is a poem about my ex. Just seeing who likes it…leave an “answer”

Now that’s it over I can’t even think about us or what we were. At the beginning I expected so much more and it’s finally come to this. I don’t even want to see you anymore. No matter how hard I try I just keep thinking about how you left me behind. You said it wasn’t my fault and that you didn’t mean to hurt me. It still hurts no matter what you say. You found someone else and I just can’t get over you. Call me crazy but it hurts to see you with her, even though you made sure I saw it. I guess you just don’t get it. When I said “I love you”, I didn’t say it out of habit or to make conversation. I would say it to remind you that it was true. I never felt like I did with anyone else just being in you’re arms. I can’t explain how much I am dealing with, and you just don’t seem to mind. Three years with someone is a long time, all the great times and you go ahead and cheat. You cheated not only with a girl, but on me. You cheated me out of all the more amazing times we would share, the moonlight dances, good morning texts, and walks on the beach. I can’t even name all the times we had, every moment with you was like heaven. I couldn’t wait to be with, and I didn’t want to be away from you. We had those petty little fights but in the end it was truly just a test of our happiness, trust, and love. You might think this is pathetic but I don’t care. You promised me that we would still be friends after all of this; well I guess you don’t understand the true meaning of a promise. We were best friends and then it all ends in the blink of an eye. I told you things no one knows and I trusted you but that’s different now too. I can never make you happy; I could be so much more without you. You always want things your way, being with you is like one step forward and two steps back. I can’t even talk to you anymore, it’s not that I’m mad at you, it’s just that I know you don’t love me like you did before. I don’t miss you; I just miss who you used to be. I can’t change you; I can only wish you will see what you have done. You changed yourself to someone you should never have been. If you were still you then everything would be different. Maybe one day, one time, you will finally realize the faults. It was you, not me. You changed everything about “us”. After all, “it’s not me, it’s you.” You even said it, the things we’ve been through together and nothing. You don’t realize the pain and sorrow I have had to deal with through all of this. I’ve wasted too much time on you now. I always thought you would be there for me but I guess not. I see the difference between what I expected and reality. You don’t care so why should I? Even though we tried to work everything work you did what you wanted even if it meant hurting the person closest to you…

Answer #1

It helps a lot when it’s in stanzas. That way it doesn’t seem like a short story or something. :)

Answer #2

well, it kinda is a short sotry, but it’s kinda like a poem to so I just put it as a poem

Answer #3

I love it<3 I

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