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hey I just wanted to know what people though of my poem.

The world keeps spinning and everyone seems to be winning

But all that goes through my mind Is that I never told you that you were the perfect find

The way you would laugh, the way you would smile, and the way you would say my name But now that’s all gone and I’m to blame and it leaves me with such shame

We would spend the late nights and early morning together And it just seemed like it would last forever

I have happy me memories that will stay with me for the rest of my life. You made everything seem larger then life

But now your gone, and everything seems so wrong I guess you just didn’t belong

But now the world is still spinning and you showed me so much. And now is the time to use it to start a new beginning.

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Answer #1

its good I really like it. I can feel what the auther was feeling and thats what makes a great poem. oh and I think there is an extra ME before memories

Answer #2

o thanks I glad you liked it and yeah thanks that me wasn’t suppose to me there

Answer #3

I really liked it. It was from the pages of my life I loved it so good!

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