The darkness

this is a poem I rote when I used to be suicidal

Passion and desire
Down the drain
Please tell me what
I have to gain

I can’t explain
How much I won’t to die
I tell my self to keep on going
Please just try

To find myself alone,
All I won’t to do is cry
My blood is shed,
And my tears run red

It drips down the drain,
And relives my pain

Passion and desire
Down the drain
Please tell me what
I have to gain

the invisible
blood I've bled
I swear there is
no more to be shed.
As I lay awake
in a dream
Listening to myself
loudly scream

Don’t worry
this will go away
I will learn to
love another day
The darkness
will depart
New love will come
and mend my heart
My thoughts of suicide
will slowly disappear
Love and self esteem
will soonly reappear.

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ANSWER #1 of 3

your a dumb sh#t its not about me wanting to die, its about over coming being suicidal. and I don't no why they let stupid little 13 year olds on this sight. grow up. the people inlife that are always happy are so fake.


ANSWER #2 of 3

I cant relate to this poem so much, so its hard to give a fair opinion.

just a few spelling and punctuation mistakes:

"All I won’t to do is cry "

correct me if I am wrong, but isnt "won't" an abbreviation for "will not", I believe the word you are looking for is "want".
"I tell my self to keep on going "

"myself" is one word.

keep writing, its a good release :)



ANSWER #3 of 3

are you crazy you must be emo you emos always wanting to die there is no reason to live


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