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Deeper-a poem...

~Deeper~ I’m swallowed in a deep blue darkness I cannot escape the darkness comes over me, swallowing up the white other days your treatment puts me in gray it takes away the sharpness and happy those days my life has been a constant white,blue,gray I just hope that it’ll be over some day that day my angels howling will not stop the angel he’s pounding in my head PLEASE make him stop this time didn’t go away or stop until I cut a little deeper, I drop.

FYI!!!Treatment=Prozac (crazy people medicine),blue=sadness,white=freeness,gray=boring and lonleyness(normalness.. as they call it)

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Answer #1

thanks:)

Answer #2

nice poem…

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