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She wont believe me. help?

I told my friend that this was a good poem and its a good way for her to let her feelings out. she doesn’t believe me…what do you think? and as you’ll be able to tell…yes, there was a recent break up…so I need advice on 2 things…is it a good poem and is writing a good way to let emotions out? I have told her my input…I guess she needs another opinion…?

I cant just stand here and take what you say to me why is only my pain the pain you cant see? was all this a joke or are you just scared? scared that for once your love wont be impaired. this all could be wrong, different feelings, you think? but I need an explanation before I begin to sink. while you stay afloat your up oh so high I sit and wonder…why must my eyes cry? happy, yeah right. upset? thats the word! and what you dont get is that I dont care what I’ve heard. I’ve gone all through hell, I guess im back for a visit. this place is so familiar how could I forget it? well, forever has an end, its a f**king black hole but soon I’ll climb out, once I get back what you stole.

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Answer #1

wow..I like that peom

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