We can't find the internet
Attempting to reconnect
Something went wrong!
Hang in there while we get back on track
What do you think of this poem I finished writing?
Hope you like it…I need a title for it…any advice? :) Thanks in advance!
You say to wait when I say why.. Things never change for you & I.. I once had patience, yet now it’s gone.. As I realized, your love for me was just a con.
You cant deny life’s too short.. Mistakes of plenty, landing you in court.. Another battle of different issues.. You know love is dead, pass some more tissues.
You say one word, they twist it’s meaning.. Wonder if there is any point reasoning.. You ache inside for they dont even care.. What you want to say, you an not bare.
The desire to simply finish what it is in your heart.. Yet a sleazy response back & forth, reminds you of why you are apart.. You wish the constant att@cking would just go away.. If only you could explain how you felt that day.
If you could just stand close enough to cover their mouth.. Yet they would pull your hand off, leading the conversation south.. There is simply no way to change a bad situation.. How can you possibly open the lines of communication?
If only a way to speak was a way to get a point out.. Perhaps it would clarify all of the doubt.. Yet no one allows you to finish what is on one’s mind.. They rather walk away leaving everything behind!
Very good! :D I love it!
Hmmm….maybe the title could be Frustration, or Frustrated? :)
awe, ty sweetie…glad you like it…/hug
As for the title…sounds interesting, I’ll have to check back with ya on that one…if I dont already have one called that.:)
Always love yur work :)
awe, thanks so much…so sweet of you to say!
Oopsi, I just caught an error…paragraph 3 last line…should be:
“What you want to say, you can not bare.” (forgot that tiny little “c”)
and since no one else has any suggestions as a title…I am gonna go with Angel’s Frustration title! :) Ty Angel…muah♥
WOW!!! It’s amazing! You have talent!………..Phenomenal.
thank you so much for your kind words, I am glad you enjoyed it! :)
-
What do you think of this poem my friend got me to write? - 2 Answers
Ok, this is about one of my best friends. Shes a funny, insane, bubbly type of person, what do you think? When life gives me...
-
What do you think of my poem? - 1 Answers
I had to right it for English class, I enjoy writing it now lol. This is deep, something you want to keep, you would even go ...
-
What should I write my poem about - 2 Answers
I'm on deviantart right now and trying to write a poem but I can't think of anything to write about. I can't really write abo...
-
Who think writing poems is weird for a boy? - 8 Answers
well I found out a few days ago that I like to write poems but I think peoples will judge me ect. like they might kind am ga...
-
why does my friend think I write depressing poems? - 7 Answers
my friend tells me I write depressing poems so I stopped showing them to her. I dont show these to anyone really except my be...
-
What do you think of this poem good or no? - 4 Answers
Before I put the poem down I would like to say. It not weird for a boy to make a poem ( I think :d). And this is the first on...
-
Finished with my poem, what do you think?:) - 4 Answers
The sun sets in front of the moon The moon rises in front of the sun its the way of nature we cant stop it We eat the animal...
-
what do you think of my poem?? - 2 Answers
what do you think of my poem?? I just started to write occasionly please tell me if you hate it!!! CLOT I am this way and yet...
-
Can someone please write me a short free verse poem? - 3 Answers
I need it for school and I cant freaking write one so please someone help
-
What do you think of my poem? - 5 Answers
A shattered heart. A broken girl. Staring in the mirror. Make up running. Red, puffy eyes. Uncontrolable sobs. Reliving it al...
Your Own Writing Coach
Writing Services, Coaching Services, Creative Writing
Diamond Nail Supplies
Nail Supplies, Beauty Essentials, Salon Equipment
Shopnobilap
Literature, Online Publishing, Community
Great-Essays.com
Academic Writing Services, Custom Paper Writing, Online Essay Services
Silverhints
Poetry, Shayari, Ghazal