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This is a poem based on winston churchill’s quote, “if your going though hell keep going”

If you’re going through hell.

If you’re going through hell; keep going- winston churchill

The wretched luck crashes down And drowns you in your blissful gown But swim just swim against the tide And your soaked will soon be dried

The hurtful words that cut and splice Leaving you but shattered ice But melt just melt and freeze again And your shattered self will quickly mend

The ground that takes, but never grants Reaches for your hand But deny it just deny its poison plants And longer you will stand

The fire that burns your inner spell Continues to scorch your mind But keep going just going through hell Cause it’ll pass, unravel, unwind.

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