Anyone like my poem

I lie here wishing I was dead Because of this painful dread Wishing you were by my side Me knowing that . That is a lie I wish it wasn’t but there is nothing I can do So why should I care why should I live Why should I live in this painful dread You never cared. But you said you did Why do you even act as if you once did. I really cared. But you never though of what Would happen if you threw that dart . I wish you would had cared but I Loved you once an you didn’t care so why sould I live in this Painful dreaded world

Answer #1

I love this poem.. I write stuff just like it.. it makes me think of when I was actually doing what you are writting about! :(

but FANTASTIC POEM!!!

Answer #2

you have a talent but the poem is really dark1!!!

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