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Wow! this is really good! I write poetry on my own and I think that this is really good! and it dosent matter if it dosen’t ryme, because there is no rules for poetry! Good Job! :)

good job!:) I write poetry also and it relates to me, it captures what a lot of people feel…it’s real…I love it!

wow! thanks so much guys! I know Im pretty weird so its hard to tell if it makes sense sometimes. its crazy you said its ‘what a lot of people feel’ because often times it feels like we are the only ones feeling a certain way and that nobody understands. so thank you!

It’s very blunt…

I think very straight forward…

Your telling me exactly what you feel and that where the problem lies.

I hate to be the one to give a negative critiscm not because I hate it.NOOO!!

I love it and I love you for writing it.But I think you could find other words to explain your poetry.

Take this poem you just wrote sit down and think about other ways to write it.Start from those exact words.It’s obvious that this poem is about not fitting in with the social crowd.

The subject doesn’t have to be a She or a person as a matter of fact.Everything you can change BUT the true message behind it.

My advice is don’t make it too obvious…it’s the mystery that makes it an art and the message that echoes in the heart.

Okay once again I Hope to read more soon…and GREAT WORK!!(:-)