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New poem, what do you think?

I can hear the rain on my window It sounds like the outside world is taking the blows Leaving me , holy and alone Chewing away on flesh and bone And I feel this indescribable pain Hidden deep inside, driving me insane And I say to myself ‘this will be the day. I will make the liars pay.” But I made the choice not to tell a soul To let all my morals and values go Read my lips and listen close because I lost m mind a long time ago

I’ve hung he angels from he rafters I’m watching the seraphyms writhing I know that they are lost And so am I. I can smell their tears, Sweat, blood and regret and I hear them scream, cry to their god But you see, m hate and pain Its digging into me And it’s like I can’t breathe and I can’t let myself cry,

I have to slowly rip off the angels wings, and hear them scream…

And in this cold dark place Where it is safe And existence has been erased Everything must eventually break..

Spreading prayer like diseases And sacrificing the seized Satisfying his need for genocide Infecting millions like plagues And coming up with new ways Disguising his tastes For Homicide

If I want to be- If I want to see- If I want to speak- I have to sacrifice EVERYTHING

                                - Myzarri
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Answer #1

I like the first part :] It doesnt fit to well together, it gets quite confusing Work on that and its good xD

Answer #2

thank you very much. = )

Answer #3

it’s really stupid! Srry that’s just my opinion because you had to ask!!

Answer #4

Very nice poem! Keep it up and maybe you can sell poetry.

Answer #5

I love it.so you write poetry to?the same type I do to.have anymore?

Answer #6

it’s pretty good. =] I enjoyed it.

Answer #7

makes no sense.

Answer #8

That would be cool. I’ve got notebooks full of poetry. Maybe I have too much time on my hands. Or too much on my mind. One of the two.

Answer #9

I never make sense, but yeah, I need to work on that.

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