Lemme know what you think 'bout my poem

To a pretty girl

The first time I seen you I Thought : Roses are red Daisies are blue Your love is true & so is mine too Wishing that: You were my wiffy & me your husby you are so dawm sexy when I’m with you wow I go crazy but as time passed by we got to know each other we were: touching, hugging kissing, and even loving Now that these things are no more I hope you don’t forget about a brother and all things we used to do whatever with one another

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Answer #1

The last 3 lines didnt go with it( dont foget about a brother) yeah you shoulve kept it dreamy and poetry like the end made it seem like a f*ckin conversation!!!

Answer #2

soo GOOD AND SWEET…

the only thing is that so darn sexy knda ruins the mood

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