What do you think of this poem "Gay Pride"?

…wtf. I’m being serious.

So am I

i think it is a good poem about how gays r kinda persecuted 4 being what they r

In your words is gay bad? Homophobe?

i thought it was pretty good, exept for the last sentance of the poem

You use the word gay and expect others to understand what you mean by it. Yet you can’t even begin to understand what others mean when they use the same word in one of the simplest possible sentences. Some poet you are turning out to be, when you ask for an opinion of your work and do not understand a simple response when it is couched using your own choice words.

S’good I actually really like it :) a few mistakes thoughhh: dike = dyke bazaar = bizarre

i like it. i just dont like rhyming so yeah lol

it has a good idea but it dosnt make me feel any differnt. it needs sumthn tht will make me feel less like i was readn sumthn written for scoool. i would recomand adding in how some people suffer through pain and torture for there love, and how they need freedom. and maybe more metaphors would help. it just needs more feeling

I like it! a couple spelling mistakes though.

yeah I fixed them on my notebook just I can’t change it here. :(

Excellent job!

I think it is quite religious. I feel like it might outcast gay people or gay allies who aren’t as religious as you may be. But otherwise it is very positive, very great.

Oh Dee sorry… but you just got pwned!!! :P

I know. :p

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