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my poem please do not copy!

I feel lost,used,torchured put in the depths of hell locked away like I did nothing at all in the world

I cry cry “let me out let me out!!” all I heard was echos of my voice screaming and yelling

I start to laugh “haha” its what I wanted. just peace and quiet and to be left alone I smile and go to sleep never to awake again

once more I smile and say “im finally happy”

this is how I feel

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Answer #1

umm it was good but I juss dont understand how you could sleep and never awake then smile like hmm I don’t know mayb I juss dont get your deepness but is the last line your poem or are you juss sayin that? what could have made it a lil bit better is if you had discribed how you came to the conclusion that quite was what you wanted…ya noe but never stop writing your good! how old are u?

Answer #2

I think that is good

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