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Im no longer the vase you where scared to break, The one you called babe all the time, The one that underappriciated you Im scared to tell you, that The only one I Cared about was you All the time, even when I said otherwise I want you to hold me one last time; Nothing bad will ever happen, when im with you . But youre gone and im getting the worst luck Bieng so far away from you makes me love you more, I now realize most fights where Me bien stubborn But now Its alittle too late, I was a vase, and I shattered .

Do you guys like it lol?

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Answer #1

I LOVE this the ferst line really got me wanting to read more. it has to be my fav line… im nolonger the vase your scared to brake <3<3<3 love it lotz. keep up the great woork (:

Answer #2

I thnk its rele good I especially like diis line

“ I want you to hold me one last time; Nothing bad will ever happen, when im with you “

Answer #3

Aww<33

Answer #4

I love it!!!it soo works wit my love life!!

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