Who believes this poem is half okay?

I Writ This in 2 Minutes! So I Know It Sucks. R8 And Comment.

The cry of pain They all turn away They didn’t want to believe They didnt want to see Because she WAS the joker The clown The reliable one They didn’t expect This

They always say the clowns smile is fake. Well… So was her’s

Answer #1

thanks guys :)

Answer #2

It’s great!

Answer #3

thats not bad I say its great who ever thinks its bad is so wrong

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