love poem by matt wells

Fill these small empty moments with smiles, just the few silent piecies of time that crack. We can make every minute of our lives worth while, even tho it’s easier to go forward than to go back. Just be sure to watch your step as you walk up these stairs, keep going up and make sure you never look down. As long as your heart is working, you’ll know that someone cares, and as long as someone cares, there will never be a reason to frown. So I’ll tell you exactly how I feel, but don’t make a sound, just close your eyes, and fill your heart with my treasure. I’ll share this with you, a valuable treasure that I’ve found, within my chest, a heart full of torment and pleasure. This feeling beholds years, stuffed with laughter and screams. It’s harder than solid tears, but beyond your wildest dreams. As the fall grows colder, after a perfect summer dies, our children will get older, like the frozen ocean tide. I hope you fall in love with the worst moments of our lives, because these mistakes are the lesson’s we will learn, we grow stronger than the strongest, smarter than the smartest, on this road of life, we usually don’t know where to turn. But love is what you make it, sort of like a painting by an artist. Most of these turns are wrong and only your future can fix the past, but sometimes we come across something in life that shouldn’t change. And learn that time will catch up to you, there’s no reason to run so fast. Just remember what I’m about to tell you, memories are the only thing about a moment that will last. We’ll try to make every second the best we ever had.

Answer #1

incredible. wish I could write something like that.

Answer #2

amazing… snap, snap, snap I loved it,,, bravo! keep it up and your poetry might become famous in the future… loved it

Answer #3

Simply amazing! You are for sure getting better at this poem stuff. I can’t believe I am talking to a soon to be famous person.

Answer #4

THIS IS GOOD… LONG BT GOOD. you DO HAVE GREAT DICTION. I ALWAYS ENJOY A GOOD POEM… I WRITE THEM MYSELF. I LIKED IT.

Answer #5

wowch!! =] thats amazing. =] I luvddd it. great diction, and amazing metaphors, too. =] like the symobolisms in it, and it really conveys the feeling well. tone and mood were really felt in it, and the feeling it gave to the senses were overwhelming. =] very well done!! =]

Answer #6

Beautiful..

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