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Love is a battle-a poem

~Love is a Battle~ love is a battle that can not be won love is something that can’t be undone love is life love is passion love is about reaction we all encounter it in our own way atleast we will one day that day will be one you will never forget though you may regret making that decision this had cleared your vision because every tear has made you stronger every tear has made you that much,bigger,better, the best you can be just think to yourself would he help me would he care for me would he love me would he…

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Answer #1

Not bad for made up on the spot but for it to be good a lot of work needs to be done. Good luck with it.

Answer #2

thx, and I wanna c some of your poetry if you even write any^

Answer #3

ok thanks…oh and to let ya know I make stuff up on the spot,so like thats why some of it mite not be so glamorous.

Answer #4

Packed full of cliches but bearable.

Answer #5

does sound like a song … I would revise it .

Answer #6

ummm thanks:)

Answer #7

well like I guess it does but what ever, I kinda like that song, and I guess I was uncontiously kinda writing it like that.

Answer #8

I wouldnt revise it! its already great and better than any poem I could ever write myself

Answer #9

Sounds like the “love is a battefield” song to me.

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