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I think it is a little all over the place, because I was a little out of it when I wrote it, but tell me what you think!
The Girl in the Blood Stained Book:
The prologue
I often miss the little girl whose dreams had no limit,
Hate me Loathe me Scar me Betrothed me
to a story with no good end
Either way I have read is leading me to a twisted epilogue
I am a liar of breath A peace-breaker till death
I dig graves for the secrets; burry them deep
A way to escape is what I seek
Heart-breaker, Heart-mender; I am them both
the ones I have sewed understand me most while the ones I have broken hate me, you see...
I hate to be rude I am a back-stabber -how crude-,
very unlikely of me
I am an open book
I am on display
when the people walk by they are oblivious to my blank pages
I hold it out so they can see
but they don’t care to notice the one thing inside of it... The little girl in the Blood Stained Book... me
Here a note to you people... BE JEALOUS and they take it to heart
yes, now they are envious
Satisfactory, retards
now the little girl has grown up
I would put it this way--- but I hate the word boast Out of all the people who hate me I hate me most
And I hate living up to the life of the little girl in the Blood Stained book
That has no escape, with pages torn, no loophole to take, Sincerity worn
I am scared, for this book gets shorter and shorter every day
that I will fail to make it perfect, to make me, ME
Sounds goth. Take a look at your grammar, and submit it for a Within Temptation song. They sing stuff like that.
and the best poem in the universe award goes to... drum roll
BLAIRE!!!
I LOOOVEEE IT!!!
OMG!!! thats sooo freakin awesome. I told you can write :)