How would you describe this poem?

Night seems to glitter, but you’ve blacked out the stars, Left me with nothing, not even my scars, No memories either, you washed them away, You took everything, even your name, But I know you were there, I put up a fight, Anew dream comes, bit by bit every night I remember it now, I can see though the murk You dirty old bastard, your trick didn’t work.

Answer #1

Very professional.

Answer #2

I believe you caught a lot of feelngs in a few short lines…a beautifuly tragic poem

Answer #3

Wow, that’s deep on so many levels. In a few short lines you’ve expessed the blocking of a bad memory, the slow unveiling of that memory and the anger and hurt of somebody abused. Again all I can say is wow. You have a talent for this.

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