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Memories of a Cell Phone
I’m never alone but I also don’t have a home, Everybody owns me, many says I’m extremely attractive, I come in all different shapes and colors; Being on magazines and televisions is my life, So yes, I’m very popular.
Every year my looks and features are improved, I give some people Google but they are some who just can’t afford me. When I’m out of credit, I borrow credit. When my battery life weakens, I always scream when I need to be charge. To be honest with you, I’m proud to say I end relationships.
My hobbies are: attending church, parties, traveling and going to school, I’m also good on spreading gossips but my favorite is singing, I love to ring and when I ring too much, I annoy everyone but when I’m silent they wonder why. However, I do fear water because it can kill me.
I don’t give good service when I’m on the highways Yet I’m everybody’s best friend, I can easily be repaired or replaced, Although I get abandon sometimes, I still make them happy for who I am.
When I’m alone I always get stolen by strangers, They sometimes sell me cheap. If you want me and have the cash then go check my latest styles; I can make you look famous and important. Yes, the life of a cell phone is always exciting.
thats really good, except on the second line it should just be say not says. but apart frm that you don't need to correct anything, its amazing :)
However, I do fear water because it can kill me.
I dont like that line
It needs a bit of work. : /