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How does my sonnet sound?

I’m writing a Shakespearean sonnet for my english class and I just wanted an opinion on how it sounds. What grade would you give me? lol

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Answer #1

It did not put the Sonnet in there. sorry lol here it is: So far, it was the best time of my life; full of friends, music, laughter, fun, and joy. Drama existed and sometimes caused strife, always made better by good, Chips Ahoy.

All of my schoolwork had bored me to tears, yet my friends and I were so entertained. With a life like this I could have no fears; when this was over nothing would be changed.

so foolish I was as the fun grew near for I had not thought of that ending soon. I had not known such friends would adhere, making my new life into a monsoon.

I look back at this time to make me smile because figuring life out might take a while.

Answer #2

it’s really good! I like it at least :) my teacher would give an A- (or A) for that

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