how do you like my poem

you always blow me off so I just stand there and cough I hate how you lie and how you make me cry we made plans and you broke em I had dreams and you choked em so now I say this to you my friend I hate you too

Answer #1

its cause its true feelings except the hate and cough part I only dislike her and I hate the cough part I dont know anything that would ryme??!!! :O

Answer #2

It’s short, simple and has a true meaning to it :) Very nice poem. I can relate to it.

Answer #3

aww that’s very good!

Answer #4

It cute and makes perfect sense, :)

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