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poem of my life

my heart is broken and cant be fixed its a cut that can never be healed a scare that will never fade away a cut so deep that its soo bad it hurts all over

it makes me cry when I sleep only when I wake im ok I hide it to keep it secret I lie and hide the secret to myself then it hurts all over my eyes start to water my hands start to tremble I start to weep then I die inside

when I hear your voice it tears and shreads right into my heart turns it icy cold black as I stand still wondering why are you doing this I loved you and now I cant youve broken me into a trillion pieces I’ve fallen and burned I brace my self for the end

its dark out cold and dreay and you are the person in my way and im the light you blew me away but no matter what I will be back

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Answer #1

It sounds similar to how I feel, but no matter how badly you hurt you always will find someone, and one day you’ll find the true someone, no matter how long it takes it will be worth the wait… Well this will only make sense if I understood your poem right… Ha..

Answer #2

wow… really good!! guessing you lost your girlfriend… srry… heres one I wrote–it sux compared 2 urs, but oh well!!

What if love is just an illusion? a fragment of an idea to be… What if love is not real? a fictional way to think of things… What happens if Love is just a belief? A thing that was just never there… But what if it’s real? what if love was to be? A fate, a destiny…

Answer #3

Not being mean or anything, but calling this ‘a poem of your life’ just made me laugh. Terrible punctuation and spelling.

Answer #4

wow..thats really good..thats exactly how I feel..

Answer #5

wow your good at puring out your feelings :)

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