poem 2 of my life

sadness its funny like riding in a car none stop when it does it hurts and the pain kicks in as you hold back you try to but never works

like fire as it burns your soul it gets darker and darker you run and run to put it out but it doesnt happen it still burns

when you rise above you have a great fall and when you hit the ground you wanna die but you cant as you fall you relise you have a purpose and need to live when you start falling you wish you hadnt rose above (doesnt it feel good being on the bottom) cause you dont take a hard fall its light as a feather as you float down people catch u

its funny how sad you really are

Answer #1

your truly an amazing writer… and I think that your poetry is some of the best I’ve read!! keep on writing!!

Answer #2

that was really good. and deep too, it takes some thinking for this one, nice (:

Answer #3

wow austin, thats really good!

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