Do you like this Poem?

I wrote this and need some opinions…

Do you hear what I hear? I hear a gunshot ring in battle, I hear a child cry, I hear a politicain Argue, and a tear fall from an eye, Do you see what I see? I see a mother searching, for a child who never came, I see a girl cry softly, Is she the one to blame? Now you can see, Now You can hear, Through the eyes of a victim, Do you hear what I hear?

Answer #1

yea… you wrote this…

Answer #2

Yes, I wrote this. My own words…

Answer #3

nice

Answer #4

its okay..keep on trying! and it can be way better

Answer #5

l like it too! WOW!! are you sure you wrote this yourself?

Answer #6

I like it. Its original with a lot of meaning.

Answer #7

awesome girls keep on writing

Answer #8

it’s…definatly interesting…

Answer #9

Of course I wrote it…

Answer #10

Dear plainwhitets, It reminded me too much of the Christmas song “Do you hear what I hear” Sue…good luck

Answer #11

wow ! how did you think of all those things ? your poem is really good.

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