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Guilty minds seeking innocent souls. The purest flesh of sinful memories. And precious freedom of moving forth. Why do we look back? Why do we sell our lives For less than theyre worth? Drowning in rivers we can not see, Failing to find what was meant to be. I refused to take the path, That god layed out for me. Now it’s too late, now it’s harder To cry when I can’t find the tears.

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Answer #1

wow!!!…

I really like your poem sir…

so beautiful,and vivid…^^

hmmm…sir… could you look at my poem???… and perfect it???…

because,.. im gona peform it on school… but I think,somethings rong at my poem…

please…???…T_T

—>>Youve sang my agonizing harmony, Youve painted colors on my sight, Youve lighten up my dim world, Youve found me unconcious And woven my wounded heart.

But why???, words pitched at me, Your gaving it all up, You throw it all away, That hurtful words was killing me inside, You left me broken hearted.

Baby,its hard on me to tear myself away from you, Nor, I dont want to be a fright and pretendings everythings alright. No!, I wont even sit here and die…

Im ganna lick d knife W/ all my tears… Im ganna embrace d chain, W/ all my blood, Im ganna scream w/ d gun, W/ all my heart, Im ganna swallow swords, W/ all my pride, Just 2 have you again.

So this time, im ganna throw it all away, One hundred forty three words…

I love you..!!!

Answer #2

I liked it. It was really good c:

Answer #3

I like it.

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