Do you like my poem???

I keep looking in all the places, Where you are supposed to be. But I never seem to find you, And you’re all I long to see.

I just can’t seem to understand, What it was that changed your mind. All this time I thought you knew, When really, I was blind.

But know that I do not hate you, And I know I never will. Because I cared about you then, And I care about you still.

Even though you hurt me, I can’t seem to let you go. But I will go on without you, And I want to make sure you know.

It will take some time to mend, The damage that we’ve done. But broken hearts do heal, And that’s where strength comes from.

For now, the tears may be falling, And my thoughts keep circling to you. But soon things will get better, If you have hope, they always do.

Answer #1

Bravo! lol Love it its really deep and the emotion just pops out!

Answer #2

I LOVE IT!!! IT’S SOO, SO, BEAUTIFUL. Like omg. I love it.

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