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Is it because shes different? is it because shes not like you? how can you have the heart to put her down at the start? its not fair!

You were once there its all the same we havent changed at all dont use her tears and her fears for your laughs!

its all a matter of time before you see her pain and rethink your thoughts and regret your actions your insucuritys got in the way so now shes stareing at her feet and her cheeks are turning red and your getting to her head Its not fair!

you were once there its all the same we havent changed at all dont use her tears and her fears for your laughs! Its not fair! its not fair!

is it because shes different? is it because shes not like you! Its not fair! you were once there its all the same we havent changed at all dont use her tears and her fears for your laughs!

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Answer #1

I don’t know, I don’t like the “it’s not fair” part, it sounds like an 8 year old crying to his/her mom because they got their toy taken away, like the person a few answers up said you should change that part, I just want to be honest but keep writing songs and good luck to you

Answer #2

I think you should change the line “It’s not fair” to something else.

Answer #3

Yahh I think its pretty good:]

Answer #4

I like it!:)

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