song I wrote do you like it?

with everything going on I still want you in my life im not ready to say good bye youve been deep in my heart I loved you from the start I cant belive your just giving up so fast just wanna fall asleep in your arms I need to let you know im gonna miss you im not sure if I can live without you I hope you happy in this new town your moving too I hope you know youll be mine agian tell mr you love me today because tomorro is too late your unforgettable in my world your the only thing on my mind but I guess now its the time to say goodbye

im not done with it

please tell me the truth I hope you like it but be honest if you dont like it please I dont care just say the truth!