do you like the song I wrote?

first verse…

baby, its seems like im fallin apart,

it feels like my heart breaking, in two,

I feel like theres a bullet in my heart,

baby why’d you have to leave me!!

chorus…

im sittin here on the couch

just waiting for you to come back!

and I dont know why but I just keep comin even though your not there,

im trying to find a way to get out of this break up!

but I dont think ill be able to..

second verse..

im just not understanding,

why did this happen?

I cant seem to relize its over,

between us…

im still trying to make you come back

but its working.

go back to chorus!

third verse..

now im standing here with nothing,

but I think its time to let it all go!

and I think God needs to show me why!

now im struggling and I dont think this is working!

I just need to take it slow,

this is a hard break up.

go back to chorus again and stop singing! lol

im only 13 do you think this song is good??? and I want to have singing career when I turn 16 because I want to go on american idol! do you think you would listen to this song?