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Missing You

Deep in the darkest part of night I reach for you with aching arms. Finding only empty space beside me My heart cries out at missing you.

Deep in the darkest part of night I wake alone, to find you gone away. I touch your pillow as tears well up Reflecting the pain of missing you.

Deep in the darkest part of night My body shakes with need for you. My tears flow freely as I lay alone In the bed we once shared, missing you.

Deep in the darkest part of night I sleep alone, waiting for your return For when you return to be with me. My arms will no longer be missing you

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Answer #1

That was really good I wrte poems to and I have to give you your props you did it at first I was like mmm okay but then as I read on I knew the feeling that you were talking about in your poem,I’m going to put one of my poems up make sure you look for you choose,under the subject love and relationships okay,good poem very touching

Answer #2

Great :)

Answer #3

damn girl thats gorgeous keep writing them

Answer #4

dats was good

Answer #5

absolutly! really touching… >.<

Answer #6

thats so beautiful I love it

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